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GUIDELINES FOR FORMAL COMPOSITIONS
a. fragments: On the way to the mountains for safety. When the child was shot. b. run-on sentences: Kino was a poor man, the doctor was very rich and ate expensive foods in his large house with the large, wooden door. c. misspelled words: Kino and the doctor are opposites in the novel by John Steinbeck. d. Contractions: The doctor doesn’t like Kino and his people and, therefore, won’t help when the child needs him. e. you, your, yours: When you read the book, you will cry and cry. f. word choice: The author brought out several aspects of the character. The doctor made fun of Kino and his people. g. awkward sentences: This was the location where we were going to. A symbol is where one thing stands for something else. h. punctuation errors: When the novel begins Kino and Juana are awakening from the night of sleep a time of rest for some of the animals and a time of hunting for others. Kino who is the main character in Steinbeck’s novel is a family man who earns his living by diving for pearls. |
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