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Baboon Writing

This is our first instructional writing piece. Students listened as the teacher read informational books about baboons. They helped to create a class web with important information that they learned. Each student used the web to create original sentences about these interesting animals. The emphasis for this piece was writing good sentences and using true information. Spelling, grammar, and conventions have been corrected to assist with understanding the pieces; however the language belongs to the students. We are super proud of our work!

Baboons

by Rebecca

 

Baboons climb on trees and they live on trees. They sleep in trees. In trees they can hide. Baboons have long muzzles. Baboons live in Africa.

 

 

 

 

 

Baboons

By Jamal

 

Baboons have sharp fangs. Baboons can be yellow brown. Baboons eat fruit. Baboons live in Africa and have long tails.

 

 

 

Baboons

by April

 

Baboons have opposable thumbs. They eat small animals. They have long tails. They live in trees.

 

 

 

 

Baboons

by Zoe

 

Baboons walk on arms and legs. Baboons eat fruit, grass, leaves, small animals, and insects.

 

 

 

 

 

Baboons

by Frankie

 

Baboons fight to be the leader. Baboons have long fangs. Baboons have strong arms. Baboons have long tails.

 

 

 

 

Baboons

by Tyler R.

 

Baboons climb trees. They can eat grass and fruit and grass.

 

 

 

 

 

Baboons

by Ashlyn

 

Baboons have strong arms. Baboons have sharp fangs. Baboons have long tails.

 

 

 

 

 

Baboons

by Synasia

 

Baboons can climb trees when they are in danger or climb trees when it's time to go to bed. They can sleep on the ground. Baboons live in Africa.

 

 

 

Baboons

by Dani

 

Baboons eat fruit. They eat small animals. They live in Africa. They sleep in trees. They have long tails. They are yellow-brown.

 

 

 

 

Baboons

by Jaylynn

 

Baboons live in Africa.  Baboons live in trees.

 

 

 

 

Baboons

by Ajay

 

Baboons live in Africa and they have sharp fangs and they eat insects and they have long tails and they climb on trees.

 

 

 

 

 

Baboons

by Josh

 

Baboons eat grass. Baboons are red-brown. Baboons live in trees.

 

 

 

 

Baboons

by Matthew

 

Baboons climb trees so they can eat leaves. They climb trees if they are in danger.

 

 

 

 

 

Baboons

by Elisa

 

Baboons have strong arms and legs. They walk on arms and legs. Baboons have long tails. Baboons have opposable thumbs.

 

 

 

 

 

Baboons

by Sara

 

Baboons like to eat fruit and grass. Baboons have long tails and they have long muzzles. Baboons have sharp fangs. Baboons walk on arms and legs.

 

 

 

 

 

Baboons

by Dustin

 

Baboons eat grass and they live in trees. They have sharp fangs and they have long tails. They have long muzzles. Baboons have black fur. Baboons walk on their legs and strong arms. Baboons live on the ground.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Baboons

by Tyler Hu.

 

Baboons climb trees. Baboons eat fruits. Baboons have sharp fangs. Baboons have strong arms. Baboons have long tails. Baboons fight to protect themselves.

 

 

 

 

Baboons

by Tyler Hy.

 

Baboons have long muzzles. Baboons eat fruit. Baboons fight to be the leader. Baboons are black. Baboons have sharp fangs! Baboons have long tails. Baboons eat small animals. Baboons live in trees. Baboons have strong arms. Baboons eat leaves. Baboons eat grass. Baboons eat grapes. Baboons eat apples. Baboons eat mangos. Baboons eat strawberries. Baboons eat oranges. (Actually baboons eat fruits, but we are not sure they eat all of these types.)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Baboons

by Rachman

 

Baboons eat fruit, grass, and leaves. They live in Africa. When it is night, they sleep in trees. When baboons are in danger, they hide in trees. They fight to be the leader. Mammals have fur and can be brown, yellow-brown, red-brown, and black. Also, mammals are warm-blooded. The mommy baboon gives milk to the baby. The baboon's fangs are really sharp. They walk on their arms and legs. Baboons have really long tails. Baboons have strong arms.

 

 

 

 

 


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