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Assignments: Tales
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Your Tale of the Dismal Swamp
- Student Resources
- Assignment
- Questions for Thought
- Assignment Objectives
- Assessment Rubric
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Your Resources:
"Mired in the Great Dismal Swamp"
(see especially the Swampy Lore; also North Carolina Legends
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Assignment:
After reading a little about the Dismal Swamp, and reading some of the
legends and tales, you will jot down some notes for a legend, tall tale, or
ghost story about the Dismal Swamp, discuss your story with your
partner, then write your short (2 pages) story of the Dismal Swamp.
Your story should be no more than about 200 words.
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Questions for Thought:
As you write your tale, consider the following--if you find it
relates to your essay.
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What are some spooky things that took place in the Dismal Swamp,
according to the legends you have read?
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What are some of the people you might meet there? Some of the animals?
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What are swamps like?
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What are differences between a legend, a tall tale, a ghost story, and a myth
(such as the return of Apollo everyday)?
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What else do you need to know about the Dismal Swamp to write your tale?
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Assignment Objectives:
Your tal will:
- Take place in the Dismal Swamp (2 points)--drawing on information found in on-line
resources to accurately describe the Swamp. (2 points)
- Take place in the 18th century (2 points)--drawing on information found in on-line
resources to make it authentic. (2 points)
- contain thoughts and ideas which are organized
- clearly (3 points)
- and in some sort of pattern/scheme. (3 points)
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Describe the swamp scenes and characters in the tale using vivid imagery.
(3 points)
- Attempt to appeal to your audience (students, teacher, community), with a
catchy opening, plus appealing language. (2 points)
- Finally, it will be edited for inconsistencies in grammar, or spelling; for comprehensibility; and for length. (1 pt)
(20 points total for writing)
In your work with your partner you will:
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Listen to and discuss partner's oral story with him/her (1 pt)
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Listen to partner when discussing with him/her your own story (1 pt)
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Rethink your story's organization, ways of describing characters and events, and ways of appealing to an audience in response to ideas/comments shared by you and your partner during your discussion (1 pt)
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Read and discuss partner's written tale with him/her (1 pt)
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Listen to and take notes during the discussion with your partner of your own written tale (1 pt)
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Make final revisions in the tale again in response to ideas/comments shared by you and your partner--during your discussion of your written tales (1 pt)
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Share your tale with the class (1 pt)
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Listen attentively & respecfully to other class members' tales (1 pt)
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Be ready to discuss the various writers' styles of tale-telling, as well as their various perspectives on the swamp (2 pts)
(10 points total for partner work)
Assessment
[More Detailed Rubric for the Tales is In Progress]
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Comparison of Two Tales of
the Lost Colony: Virginia Dare and the White Doe, and The White Doe (at "Tales from the Coast")
- Teacher Notes
- Student Resources
- Assignment
- Questions for Thought
- Assignment Objectives
- Assessment Rubric
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Teacher Notes
- Literary Style refers to the way the writer tells a story; whether the writer builds up suspense or not, describes a lot or a little, uses simple language and sentences or complex embedded ones (like Faulkner).
- Literary Point of View refers to the "lense" through which the tale teller looks at events in the tale; the tale teller may sympathize with some characters and not others for example; the tale teller may also find a story humorous that another finds as tragic (this happened to me when I read a Romance Novel--I found it funny but someone else found it sad); the tale teller may even find some events important that another teller would find absolutely insignificant.
- Background Knowledge is used in this assignment to indicate what the tale teller really knows about the actual events behind a tale that is based in part on facts--not on what events he/she thinks are important, but what events he/she actually knows happened.
- Eric Auerbach (in "Odysseus' Scar," 1972, rpt. from Mimesis, by Auerbach) compares the language and style in Homer's Odyssey and in the Hebrew Bible:
In the Odyssey, ". . . digressions are not meant to keep the reader in suspense, but rather to relax the tension. . . . The . . . charming, and subtly fashioned story of the hunt, with all its elegance and self-sufficiency, its wealth of idyllic pictures, seeks to win the reader over to itself as long as he is hearing it, to make him forget what has just taken place . . . ."
In contrast, in the Hebrew Bible, there is no description. Where are the speakers, Auerbach asks. "We are not told," he ascertains, and adds that while an epithet is added to every name in Homer's Odyssey, descriptive epithets and adjectives are rare in the Bible, where readers are told "only the essential," spartan information about familial relations.
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Your Resources:
The Lost Colony of Roanoke; Virginia Dare and the White Doe, and The White Doe (at Coastal Guide's "Tales from the Coast"); also Legends of Early North Carolina; and Legends, Myths, Historical Stories of the Iroquois, Cherokee, and
Unknown Tribes (from Stonee's Web Lodge)
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Assignment:
This assignment has two parts:
- In Part A, you will compare and contrast two versions of the 'Lost
Colony Tale,' first with your partner, and then as part of a class discussion.
You will attempt to decide which variations are variations in the teller's
style, which are variations in the teller's perspective, and which are
variations in what the teller knows. Finally, you will try to decide
whether either version is more or less like other tales in the "Legends of Early
North Carolina" group, other tales in Coastal Guide's "Tales from the Coast," or
other tales in "Legends, Myths, Historical Stories of the Iroquois, Cherokee,
and Unknown Tribes" (from Stonee's Web Lodge).
- In Part B, you will decide which style and perspective you want to
add to
the "Tale of the Dismal Swamp," you have already written
. Then think
about what changes you will need to make in your tale to create the style and
perspective you want. Then you will try your revisions.
Your revised tale again should no more than about 200 words!
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Questions for Thought:
As you compare the tales, and think about how you will rewrite
your tale, consider the following:
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What features--of style or perspective--identify "tall tales," "instructional
tales," and "tragic tales?" What would you need to change in a tall tale
to make it instructional? Or tragic?
- Are style and perspective always independent of one another in storytelling?
Sometimes independent? Never independent?
- Is either a person's style or perspective ever influenced by his/her
culture?
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Are there any stylistic features that the tales in Stonee's Web Lodge
Collection--in the "Legends, Myths, Historical Stories of the Iroquois,
Cherokee, and Unknown Tribes" page--have in common? Are these stylistic
features shared by all tales, or just by the tales in this collection? What about perspectives?
Do these tales share any perspectives that are unique to the tales in this collection?
- What would you need to change in a story from another collection (a particular story or a typical story) to make it more
like a story from Stonee's Web Lodge Collection?
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Assignment Objectives:
In your first conversation with your partner you will:
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Identify the teller's style of telling each tale of 'the Lost Colony' (1/2 pt)
- and will compare and contrast style in both tales (1/2 pt)
- Identify's the teller's perspective in each tale of 'the Lost Colony' (1/2 pt)
- and will compare and contrast the perspectives in both tales (1/2 pt)
- Identify's the teller's background knowledge of the Colony in each tale of 'the Lost Colony' (1/2 pt)
- and will compare and contrast the background knowledge that appears in both tales (1/2 pt)
- Listen with respect to your partner's comments on the two tales, and comment thoughtfully on comments made by your partner that interest you (3 pts)
In your first conversation in class you will:
- Identify differences in style, perspective, and background knowledge in the two versions in the tale of 'the Lost Colony' (2 pts)
- Listen with respect to your classmates' comments on the two tales, and
comment thoughtfully on comments that interest you (2 pts)
In your second conversation with your partner you will:
- Identify stylistic features and perspectives presented in the Stonee Lodge American Indian Tales that seem different from stylistic features and perspectives presented in other tales studied (non-Indian)
(1 pt)
- Identify ways that a non-Indian tale might be changed to make it sound 'Indian' or vice versa (1 pt)
- Identify Indian and/or non-Indian stylistic features and perspectives in the two tales of 'the Lost Colony' (1 pt)
- Listen respectfully to your partner's ideas about style and perspectives in these tales, and comment thoughtfully on those ideas that interest you. (3 pts)
In the final class conversation you will:
- Share your revised tale or talk about the revision you made or both (2 pts)
- Share your ideas about which features are Indian/non-Indian in the two 'Lost Colony' tales
(1 pt)
- Listen respectfully to your classmates revised tales, revision stories, and hypotheses.
(1 pt)
(20 points total for partner and class activities)
In your revision you will:
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Consider the style and perspective you think your tale would work best with, and
identify possible revisions in your tale that might help to create this style
and perspective (2 pts)
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Try the revisions in your tale (2 pts)
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Edit your tale with the help of your partner--that is, peer-edit it (1/2 pt)
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and also help your partner edit his/her tale (1/2 pt)
Your final tale will be edited so that:
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the story follows a pattern of organization (1 pt)
- the ideas in the story are expressed clearly and descriptions in it are clear (1 pt)
- the teller of the story seems to reach out to the audience, attempting to entertain or provoke or . . . (1 pt)
- the story's style and perspective show control (1 pt)
- spelling and grammar are understandable and generally consistent, and dialect is used appropriately (1 pt)
(10 points total for writing activities and revision)
Assessment [Rubric for "Revising Tales and Comparing Multiple Versions" in process??]
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