Student Writing

  1. Josh
  2. A. B.
  3. Dylan
  4. Aleciea
  5. Carl
  6. Amanda
  7. Taylor
  8. Jennifer
  9. Justin



Josh

Dear Mom and Dad,

	
     Imagine my friends and me going on the Hurricane by 
ourselves. Picture you getting to relax and do what you want to 
do. This could all come true, if you let me bring some friends to 
Wisconsin Dells.  You should do this because it will be fun for 
my friends and me.  We could all be happy and do things different 
than the last time we went. You could see and do things you 
didn’t get to do last summer.

	Going to Wisconsin Dells will be fun for everyone. We 
will be able to do what we want to do and leave you alone. My 
friends and I could go to places on our time 
and not have to wait for you. We would stick together and share a 
room, so you could have peace and quiet and go to bed when you 
want too.

	If you allow me to bring my friends, I would be happy and 
would have more fun than last time we went.  I won’t be so bored 
and will have someone to go an all the rides and waterslides 
with. You don’t have to go with me anymore. 

	You will be free of kids for the day and would be able to 
do things you like to do, like horseback riding that you didn’t 
get to do the last time. You would have as much fun as we will, 
but without kids being around. We would still eat dinner together 
and can swim too.

	If we go to Wisconsin Dells and you let me have my 
friends come along, you will have the best vacation ever. You 
will have more fun than last time and more time of being alone 
with peace and quiet. My friends and I will have fun too. I hope 
you consider this request.


                                               Sincerely,



                                                    Josh
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A. B.

Dear Mom and Dad,

	Picture Lauren and me getting along for once. Imagine us 
screaming and cheering. This can all come true if we go on a trip 
to Nickelodeon Universe. We should go to Nickelodeon Universe 
because we would have a lot of fun, we could go with Bailey, and 
winter is cold and boring.
	We would have a lot of fun. We could go on the hot air 
balloons, Lauren’s favorite ride. Also, I might want to go on one 
of the roller-costars. We could try the new rides that kinds say 
are so fun.
	We could go with Bailey. If she was there, Lauren could 
sit with dad on the roller-costar and I can go with Bailey. 
Bailey also has a season pass so she can go for free and we would 
get a discount. Lastly, we have not gotten together with them in 
a long time.
	Winter is cold and boring. If we went there, we would 
have something to do over winter bread. Also, we would get a lot 
of exercise running from ride to ride. We will be together having 
family time.
	We should go to Nickelodeon Universe because we would 
have a lot of fun, we could go with Bailey, and winter is cold 
and boring. I hope you will keep this in mind.
					Love,
						A. B.
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Dylan

Dear Mom,

	Imagine me on the projector playing my radical brand new 
PS3 having the best time of my life. This could all come true if 
you get me a PS3. You should get me a PS3 because the graphics 
are better, there are better games, and you can play online as 
well.

	One reason is the graphics are way better. It’s pretty 
much like your watching a real football game on your PS3. It is 
also much more clear than the PS2 it’s unbelievable.

	Another reason is there are so much more fun games. They 
have a lot of fantastic sport games. They also have the best war 
games ever. They are so much more better then the PS2 games.

	The last reason is you can play online. You can play real 
people in your own room from other places. It’s mind blowing how 
cool that is. You can even talk to people if you buy a headset. 
You can play your friends in war games head to head.

	You should get a PS3 for me because the graphics are 
better, there are better games, and you can play online.

				Your kid,

				Dylan
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Aleciea

Dear Mom and Matt,
	
	Imagine other people who don’t have clothes be able to 
have toys to play with and clothes to wear. Picture me not having 
1,000,000 pairs of clothes and toys. This could all come true if 
you let me give away some of me clothes and toys to poor kids.
	You should let me do this because other people need this 
stuff more than I do. They can’t afford this stuff. So it would 
be nice to give to them. I don’t need as much stuff. My closet is 
cramped with clothes. 
        My room is cram-packed with toys, movies, cds and I even 
have a television. It would be nice to give away to people less 
fortunate. Parents can’t afford to buy things for their kids. 
Poor kids can play with the games that I don’t play with. 
	Imagine people with no toys and clothes being able to 
have them. Picture me not having 1,000,000 pairs of clothes and 
toys. This could all come true if you let me give away some of my 
clothes and toys!



				 Your loving daughter,
					Aleciea  
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Carl

Dear Mom and Dad,

	Imagine me being able to call you if I get in trouble. 
Picture me being able to talk to my friends whenever I want to. 
This can all come true if you get me a cell phone.
	If I’m out of the house at a baseball game or practice I 
can call you if I get into trouble. 
	I can call my friends when ever I want to. I can call 
them and ask if they want to go to a baseball game or something 
like that.
	A lot of my friends have one. Parker,Josh,Sam,Cody. And 
they talk about how cool they are.
	I should get a cell phone because, I can call you if I 
get in trouble, I can call my friends and finally many of my 
friends have them. Please get me a cell phone.
		


			Your son,

			Carl  
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Amanda

Dear Mom,
	Imagine me having a cell phone so I can talk to my 
friends and text my friends. This would all came true if you get 
me a cell phone.
	It would be quite when I am at my friends house.  I will 
be quite so when I am texting instead of talking.
	I will listen to you when you need something.  I can help 
out around the house.  I will do my best to listen to you.
	I am going to take care of my cell phone.  I will call 
you so you no where I am.  I will listen to you when you need me. 
					Love,
						Amanda
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Taylor

Dear Mom,

	Imagine friends ooing and ahing over my phone. Picture me 
being an awesome topic everyone wants to talk about. This can all 
come true if you get me a phone for my Birthday or Christmas. I 
should have a phone because it will make me happier than Jake 
with sugar in his system, I would call and text friends, and it 
would only be fair.
 
	If you get me a cell phone it would make me happier than 
Jake with sugar in his system. I wouldn’t be the crabby and mean 
child I am right now. I would not misbehave because I wouldn’t 
want my phone to get taken away. I would appreciate you 100,000 
more than I do now.

	I’d like a phone so I can call and text with friends. You 
would be happy with me because I never liked to be with anyone 
but my family all the time but with a phone I would be with 
friends. I would maybe make more friends. I wouldn’t be so quiet 
and speechless at home. 

	You should get me a phone because it would only be fair. 
I don’t think its fair that only you and Jake get a phone. If you 
get me a phone we would be a happy family. You should get me a 
phone because I feel left out.

	Imagine friends ooing and ahing over my phone. Picture me 
being an awesome topic everyone wants to talk about. This can all 
come true if you get me a phone for my Birthday or Christmas. I 
should have a phone because it will make me happier than Jake 
with sugar in his system, I would call and text friends, and it 
would only be 
fair.                                                             
  

					Love, 
                                               Taylor   
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Jennifer

Dear Mom and Dad, 
	Imagine flying about 2000 miles while relaxing on a plane 
ride. Picture being reunited with cousins and other family 
members to have new experiences. This could all come true if we 
take a trip to Washington D.C and a train ride to New York to see 
the statue of liberty. We should go on this trip because we 
aren’t going to live forever, we will get to see family members, 
what better way to spend money than on the perfect trip, and we 
all need to see important landmarks.
	We aren’t going to live forever, so we might as well take 
a trip. This could be a great family time and experience. We 
would get to have an exciting adventure. We could also learn 
things on the trip by taking drives around and exploring. 
	We will get to see family members. We will get to spend 
time with family we don’t see very often. We will get to do fun 
things with them and have fun adventures with them. We can also 
just have a time to talk with our family. This would be a great 
time to take a trip because we would get to see family and go to 
Washington D.C and New York.
	What better way to spend your money than on a trip to 
Washington D.C and New York. I could help pay for the trip. We 
won’t have to buy as many Christmas presents because the trip 
would be a great Christmas present for us children. We will all 
have fun and enjoy ourselves.
	 We all need to see important landmarks. We all need to 
see the Statue of Liberty. We would all get to experience a train 
ride. We could see neat things on our trip while we are there.  
Washington is a great place that lots of people should see.  This 
trip could also help us learn more about the United States of 
America.
	This trip is a great idea because we aren’t going to live 
forever, we will get to see family members, what better way to 
spend money than on the perfect family trip, and we all need to 
see important landmarks. I hope you consider thinking about what 
I asked you to think about (even if it is a very big thing to ask 
for) because it would be a life changing experience.  I would 
like to go 100 times more than any other place in the world. This 
trip would be like dancing in the sky.
					Love always,
						Jennifer
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Justin

Dear Mrs. Mom, 
	Imagine having me as quite as ever and you wonder what I 
am doing than you remember. Pitcher having the house absolutely 
positively completely silent (accept for Alexis) feeling I am 
gone ether I am or not. This could all happen if I could get more 
stuff for Christmas.
	I think we should get a dog. I would get be out side more 
and get more exercise. I would clean up after him/her. We could 
buy funny clothes for him/her.
	I think we should get an X-Box 360 Live. It will occupy 
my time so I’m out of your face and not bugging you. I would have 
some thing to do when you are out of the house doing hair cuts so 
Alexis can stop complaining and all 3 of us will be happy. All of 
my obniches friends would be occupied with my X-Box 360 Live so 
you can work with whatever you want to work with.
	I think I should get a crotch rocket motorcycle form 
razor.  I would be gone to go to my friend’s house and I will be 
back in ten seconds if they can’t play.  You don’t need to worry 
about where I am because I will be back so quickly.  You could 
trust me to go to Joe’s house in a short time.
	I want more stuff for Christmas.  We should get a dog, X-
Box 360 Live, and a crotch rocket from Razor.  I hope you 
consider my request.
				Your son,
					Justin
P.S.  I love you.
P.P.S.  I would die to have this stuff.
P.P.P.S.  If you get this stuff, thank you.
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