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  1. Sara
  2. Tyler
  3. Jesse
  4. Zack
  5. Joey
  6. Ice Cream
  7. Kenzie
  8. Parker



Sara

Dear Mom and Dad,

	Imagine together having more family time. Picture going 
out places. Think of talking more with your family. This could 
all come true if our family has more family time. We should have 
more family time because we would have alot more time together, 
we would be able to talk more, and we could go out with our 
family more often.

	One reason we should have more family time is because we 
could have a learning experience by playing games as a family, 
watch a fascinating movie together, and we could even clean if we 
really wanted to. Also fun in most families is a basic need.

	If we talk more with each other that would also be 
considered as family time. As a family we should spend more time 
with each other and we can learn new things about each other. 
Also we could help solve their problems or even old problems. 
Last, but not least we can even teach each other new things or 
games.

	Picture us as a family being able to go out. We could go 
out to dinner maybe once in a while. Also we could go shopping as 
a family. We could go out and play at the park as a wonderful, 
happy, and kind family.

	We should have more family time because we would have 
alot more fun, we could talk more with each other, and we could 
also go out more with our family. Mom and Dad I really hope you 
consider my request to have more family time. I also Love you to 
the moon and back! 



				You’re Daughter,
					Sara!
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Tyler

Dear Dad,

 	You should bring me to one of Levi’s races. Because I 
have never been there before . I would like to go because he is 
my cousin and I never get to see him unless he is on tv.

       If you bring me I will have so much fun. Because we could 
see Levi and uncle steve and brandon . And if you have fun we 
might keep going there. And we could get Levi’s posters and hang 
out with him.

	I think you should bring me to Levi’s races because I 
have never been there before, never get to see him and we would 
have so much fun.



					From,
                                 Tyler
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Jesse

Dear Mom and Dad,

	Imagine not yelling outside hoping that I would hear you. 
Picture me coming home on time for dinner and if we have to go 
somewhere I’ll be home on time. You should get me a phone because 
you won’t have to yell outside so the penguins can hear you. You 
should also get me phone because every one of my friends has one. 
I will not have to check in and waste air.

	You won’t have to yell outside so the penguins can hear 
you. You cause you can just call my cell phone. Anther reason is 
you won’t have to call my friends parents anymore you’ll just 
have to call me. You can just give me a time to be home and I’ll 
be home on time. 

	Everybody that is my friend has a phone .If you get me a 
phone I will get to talk with my friends more cause I won’t have 
to go over to their house to talk to them I can talk to them in 
my own bedroom that is mind blowing! 

	I won’t have to waste the air by checking in every 
minute. If you get me a phone you will just have to call me. You 
can also give me a time and then I can just check on my phone. 

	You should get me phone because you won’t have to call me 
from outside anymore. Everybody that is my friend has one. I 
don’t have to waste the air by checking in every minute. I really 
want this so I hope you get me this.

				Your kid,
					
				Jesse
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Zack

Dear Dad
	Imagine happy sons smiling at you, and not bothering you. 
That can happen if you help us with our homework. Because we 
never get done quicker.
	You never help us when we bring social studies, dol/dm, 
and math boxes for homework.
	Joan does the most of the helping with our math boxes, 
dol/dm, and study link.
	You never get the supplies for math, art, and social 
studies.
		Because we never get done quicker. You never 
help, you never get the supplies, and Joan helps the most. 

  
Sincerely, 
zack
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Joey

Dear Mom and or Dad,
	Imagine Ally and I not fighting.  Picture me not bugging 
you.  This can all come true if you get me a new room!  You 
should get me a new room because I’m sick and tired of ally, so I 
won’t annoy you, and so I can hang out with my friends alone.
	The first reason is I’m sick and tired of Ally.  Ally 
keeps on fighting with me and I want her to stop because I always 
get blamed for it.  If you do get me a new room I’ll stop 
fighting with her.
	The second reason is I won’t bother you.  I won’t annoy 
you because I’m in my room downstairs.  When I’m in my room it 
will calm me down (sometimes).
	The third is so I can hang out with my friends alone.  
We’ll be quiet I promise!  I want to hang out with my friends 
without Ally annoying us.
	You should get me a new room because I’m sick and tired 
of Ally annoying me, so I can hang out with my friends alone, I 
won’t annoy you.  I won’t fight with Ally again (only when I’m in 
my room, but I will be in there a long time).  Please get me a 
new room!

						Your son,
							Joe
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Ice Cream

Dear Mom and Dad,

Picture me not complaining any more for a phone. Imagine me 
riding on a plane perfectly happy. This can all come to life if 
you get me a phone and/or go to New York City. I would like a 
phone and/or go to New York City. I want my own phone and I have 
never been to New York City.

I want my own phone. I am tired of sharing with Maggie. It would 
be better for both of us. She tries to be the boss of it. I’m 
also responsible enough for a phone. I promise to never lose the 
phone. Finally I won’t bug anyone any more if I got a phone.

I would like it if we went to New York City. First I have never 
been to New York City. I have seen it on TV but I’ve never been 
there in real life. I also have a scholarship from JUMP. Remember 
when you said maybe, change your mind and say yes!

I think I should get at least one. If I got at least one I would 
be bouncing off the walls! I’m also responsible for both.

 This can all come to life if you get me a phone and /or go to 
New York City. I would like a phone and/or go to New York City 
because I’ve never been there and I’ve never had my own. I would 
love truly for Christmas.

Your loving daughter,
Ice Cream
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Kenzie

Dear Mom and Dad,

Imagine me not yelling at Danielle because I have music to calm 
me down. This could all come true if you get me an i pod. I 
should get an I pod because music is said to calm you down, I can 
turn the music up really loud to ignore Danielle, and it holds 
more songs than my MP3 player.

You should get me an I pod because it has music and music is said 
to calm people down. When I’m frustrated I can listen to my I 
pod. When I have a lot of energy I can listen to my I pod. 
Sometimes I get nervous before a gymnastics meet I can listen to 
some calm music.

Another reason you should let me get an I pod is I can turn the 
music up really loud to ignore Danielle or I can share it with 
her to keep her quiet. I can also share with you to. Danielle and 
I won’t fight as often as we do recently. The house will be 
quieter and more peaceful. Another thing I can do is let Danielle 
listen to it before meets, because she gets nervous.

An I pod can hold way more songs than my MP3 player. I want more 
songs on my MP3 player. There won’t be enough room in it. Also 
songs are really hard to find on it. On an I pod its easier for 
people to find the song they want to hear without any difficulty. 
And there will be enough room left for you to put songs in to. I 
should get an I pod because I can turn it up to ignore Danielle, 
and an MP3 player. I hope you think about getting me one.

With love,

Kenzie
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Parker

Dear Mom and Dad,

	Imagine having an emergency and not having a phone. This 
won’t happen if you get me a phone like the NV touch. If you get 
hit by a car and you need to call me so I know what happen.

	With the NV touch I can text in the car and at the cabin. 
When am texting I’m quiet and you like that.

	Whet my own NV touch I can call people when you are busy. 
And you can call me to come home from my friend house.

	In an emergency I could call every body in my family and 
they can call me. In busy family need to be able to connect.

	The NV touch is cool because it has a keyboard and a 
touch screen I hope you get me this for Christmas.

					From,  
						Parker
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