Even More Writing

  1. Alexis
  2. Eli
  3. Mack
  4. Olive Garden



Alexis

Dear Auntie Debbie,
		
	I would like to play with Desiree and Jacob. We could 
play together more. We could get to know each other more. We 
could spend more family time too. This is why I think we could 
spend more time together more.

	We could play together more .One reason we could is we 
could use teamwork.  You could see us playing marvelously in the 
snow or summer time. As were helping each other.  Seeing us 
waiting or helping everyone by pushing the snowball. 

	We could learn more about each other.  One reason is we 
would then know more about each other. We would have less fight. 
We would be more generous. We would help in school more.

	 We would have more family time. We are usually be at 
games or karate  or dance things .We have been doing trips and 
going to the cabin but now its winter and were not seeing each 
other often. I miss frog catching and putting them back in the 
pond.

	Now we can play, learn, and connect. Auntie Debbie and 
Ayana pretty please accept my request. I think this will be 
great. Please conceder my request soon.

				Love,
				Alexis
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Eli

Dear Mom,

Imagine me and Bryon not fighting over what is his and what is 
mine. This can all come true If you give me my own room. You 
should give me my own room because Bryon always takes over the 
room.
	You should give me my own room because whenever I try and 
clean the room he just throws his clows all over the room. You 
should give me my own room because when I share a room with Bryon 
he always messes with my stuff. Bryon puts his stuff on my side 
of the room. When I put his stuff or my things on his side of the 
room he yells at me.

		From, 
                      Eli  
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Mack

Dear Mom and Dad,
	Imagine me playing WII instead of watching TV. Picture me 
getting more leg strength and more exercise. This all could come 
true if you get me Dance Dance Revolution Hottest Party 3. I 
should get DDR 3 because I can do two player, we can use the WII 
fit board, and I would play WII more often.
	I can do two player instead of one player. Now only one 
person can play and one person has to watch. One person gets left 
out and it is not fun. I can finally play when someone is over.
	We can use the WII fit board. I can more exercise. I 
could get more fit. I would get more balance witch is good 
because when I do the high balance beam I need balance.
	I would play WII more often. It would be a new game 
instead of the old games I have played about one thousand times. 
I’m so sick and tired of the old games. It would be a cooler game.
	You should get me DDR 3 because I can do two player, we 
can use the WII fit board, I would play WII more often. I hope 
you get me DDR #3.

				Your daughter,
				Mackenzie       
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Olive Garden

Dear Daddy,
	Imagine me calling you to talk about my day. Picture me 
not using your phone. I would like a phone because it can be old, 
I’m old enough for one, I’ll be as happy as a monkeys uncle.
It doesn’t need to be expensive. I don’t care if it’s green, 
black, or pink. My favorite color is blue though.I’ll be happy to 
have your old one.I’s not that bad.Just because I ask for an old 
one doesn’t mean I don’t want a new one.
	I’m old enough for one.I’m almost 11 years old.That 
reminds me if you don’t get me one for Christmas you can get me 
one for my birthday.I’ll soon be able to babysit.I’m going to 
need a phone for emergencies.Anyway I wont do anything stupid 
with it.Like drop it or lose it. I want one that bad.
	I’ll be happier than a monkey’s uncle.I’ll be happy for 
the rest of my life.I’ll get to use it in the car on the way to 
grandma’s house.I’ll be able to call my friends when they get 
one. If I have internet on it I’ll be able to look up things on 
it.
	I would like a phone because it can be old, I’m old 
enough for one, I’ll be as happy as a monkeys uncle. Please get 
this for me.
						



						Love, 
						Olive Garden
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