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  1. Alexis
  2. Eli
  3. Mack
  4. Olive Garden
  5. Sage
  6. Isabelle
  7. Christian
  8. Rachel



Alexis

Dear Ayana,
	
	I would like to play with Desiree and Jacob. We could 
play together more. We could get to know each other more. We 
could spend more family time too. This is why I think we could 
spend more time together more.

	We could play together more .One reason we could is we 
could use teamwork.  You could see us playing marvelously in the 
snow or summer time. As were helping each other.  Seeing us 
waiting or helping everyone by pushing the snowball. 

	We could learn more about each other.  One reason is we 
would then know more about each other. We would have less fight. 
We would be more generous. We would help in school more.

	 We would have more family time. We are usually be at 
games or karate  or dance things .We have been doing trips and 
going to the cabin but now its winter and were not seeing each 
other often. I miss frog catching and putting them back in the 
pond.

	Now we can play, learn, and connect. Ayana pretty please 
accept my request. I think this will be great. Please conceder my 
request soon.

				Love,
				Alexis
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Eli

Dear Mom,

Imagine me and Bryon not fighting over what is his and what is 
mine. This can all come true If you give me my own room. You 
should give me my own room because Bryon always takes over the 
room.
	You should give me my own room because whenever I try and 
clean the room he just throws his clows all over the room. You 
should give me my own room because when I share a room with Bryon 
he always messes with my stuff. Bryon puts his stuff on my side 
of the room. When I put his stuff or my things on his side of the 
room he yells at me.

		From, 
                      Eli  
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Mack

Dear Mom and Dad,
	Imagine me playing WII instead of watching TV. Picture me 
getting more leg strength and more exercise. This all could come 
true if you get me Dance Dance Revolution Hottest Party 3. I 
should get DDR 3 because I can do two player, we can use the WII 
fit board, and I would play WII more often.
	I can do two player instead of one player. Now only one 
person can play and one person has to watch. One person gets left 
out and it is not fun. I can finally play when someone is over.
	We can use the WII fit board. I can more exercise. I 
could get more fit. I would get more balance witch is good 
because when I do the high balance beam I need balance.
	I would play WII more often. It would be a new game 
instead of the old games I have played about one thousand times. 
I’m so sick and tired of the old games. It would be a cooler game.
	You should get me DDR 3 because I can do two player, we 
can use the WII fit board, I would play WII more often. I hope 
you get me DDR #3.

				Your daughter,
				Mackenzie       
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Olive Garden

Dear Daddy,
	Imagine me calling you to talk about my day. Picture me 
not using your phone. This could all come true if you get me a 
phone.  I would like a phone because it can be old, I’m old 
enough for one, I’ll be as happy as a monkeys uncle.
	It doesn’t need to be expensive.I don’t care if it’s 
green, black, or pink. My favorite color is blue though. I’ll be 
happy to have your old one. It’s not that bad. Just because I ask 
for an old one doesn’t mean I don’t want a new one.
	I’m old enough for one. I’m almost 11 years old. That 
reminds me if you don’t get me one for Christmas you can get me 
one for my birthday. I’ll soon be able to babysit. I’m going to 
need a phone for emergencies. Anyway I wont do anything stupid 
with it. Like drop it or lose it. I want one that bad.
	I’ll be happier than a monkey’s uncle. I’ll be happy for 
the rest of my life. I’ll get to use it in the car on the way to 
Grandma’s house. I’ll be able to call my friends when they get 
one. If I have internet on it I’ll be able to look up things on 
it.
	I would like a phone because it can be old, I’m old 
enough for one, and I’ll be as happy as a monkey’s uncle. Please 
get this for me.
						

						Love, 
						Olive Garden
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Sage

Dear Mom and Dad,
	Picture my room germ free and amazingly clean.  Imagine 
me being more mature and confident.  This could all come true if 
you remodel my room.
	If you remodel my room as a birthday surprise, it would 
be awesome.  I would remember it until I am as old as Mr. Mag, 
and that’s Industrial Revolution old!  You wouldn’t have to buy 
me tons of little gifts that only last a year.  Instead, you 
could get me one superb present that will last until my kids and 
I visit you.  Another great reason is that it would be really 
cool if my first night in my new room was with all my friends at 
my 11th birthday party.
	My room makes me feel like I’m Sam’s age.  If you 
remodeled my room, I’d feel more mature.  I’d love having friends 
over, and I’d be feeling extremely confident as they ooh and aah 
at my awesome room.  On top of that I would spend less time on 
screens if I had better things to do in my nice mature room.
	What’s not more is that my room would be clean because 
I’d care about it more.  If it was clean, I wouldn’t lose 
things.  Also, my room wouldn’t be germy, and that equals not 
missing school and who wouldn’t want that?
	I strongly believe that if you remodeled my room it’d be 
an awesome birthday gift, I’d be more confident, and it would be 
tons cleaner.  Please consider my requests.
			Your loving daughter,
			Sage
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Isabelle

Dear Mom and Dad,

	Imagine having a spotlessly clean house because your 
perfect daughter (yes I mean me. Who else would I be talking 
about?) Cleaned it up all by her just to get one thing. And that 
thing is a cell phone. Here are four wonderfully accurate reasons 
why I should get a cell phone. Number one is that it would be 
safer, I could just text you when I need to be picked up, I 
wouldn’t bug you any more for being “SO BORED!” and I am an 
individual.

	My first reason I should get a cell phone is that I am 
the only one in our family left in elementary school. It would be 
safer for me to have a phone because if something happened I 
would be able to call the police before somebody could say cock a 
doddle doo.

	My second reason for getting a phone is that I could just 
text you when I need to be picked up. Plus I wouldn’t get sick 
from using the school phone with all that swine flu/H1N1 stuff 
going around. You can never know what types of things are on 
everyday objects anymore. And you wouldn’t want your precious 
daughter getting sick, would you?

	My third, but not final paragraph is about me getting 
quote quote “So bored I’m gonna DIE!” Also if I don’t bug you 
about being bored I won’t make you mad about me saying “There’s 
nothing to do!” When you would answer “Nothing to do, nothing to 
do!, where went all the toys, and games I got you so you wouldn’t 
be bored? And guess what, I won’t DIE!!!!!!!

	My fourth and final reason for why I should get a phone 
is that MJ gets one and I don’t. I would technically be getting a 
phone at the same time as her, just a lit…………. wait a minute! I’m 
her so why must I do every thing exactly the same as her? That’s 
just it! I DON”T have to.  So why are you treating me that way? 
I am an individual and so there! Give me a cell phone or give me 
death. (I hope you don’t choose the second choice because that is 
no longer a choice! No dead children.)

	Hence, you should give me a cell phone because I’m the 
only one left in our family in the elementary school, I can just 
call you when I need to be picked up, I wouldn’t bug you anymore 
for being “So bored I’m gonna DIE!”, and I’m an individual. I 
really hope you get me a phone. 
				
				You perfect daughter,
					Isabelle
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Christian

Dear Mom & Dad,

	Picture me being happy and not bothering you if you. Get 
me one of these. Cell phone, change my bedroom, alwents, or a 
tree house this can all happen if you give me one of these

	Alwents. I only want 50 cents a week. I can a beet 
happier form now on. And the girls would be to. And if we get 
more money you could parable just give money for a Christmas gift.

	Tree house .I would like a tree house because MY SISTERS 
always bother me when I am in my special place ((bedroom)). And I 
can get fresh air when I’m up there. Plues I have always wanted 
one.

	Cell-phone. I would like one because I think I’m old 
enght. And I would not be board all the time in the car. All my 
friends have cell-phones and I feel left out

	Change my bedroom. My room would be cleaner. And it’s 
getting a little boring. And I want to try something new.

	Mom & Dad I hope conceder one of my request.



			Your one and only son 

			Christian
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Rachel

Dear Mom and Dad,

	Imagine me getting better reading grades in school. This 
can all come true if we get another pet. We should get another 
pet because we can read to it, get exicerise, and play with it.
	We can read to it. Dad wants another guy in the family 
and it fits in every basic need. And the best of all I can get 
better reading grades. I can also do way better in schoolwork.
	We can get plenty of great exercise and get outside more. 
We can take it on long walks so it gets tired and not get hyper. 
It can play with Zoë so it will be happy and not sad or scared.
	We can play with it. We can all be happy playing with it. 
It can also play with Zoë or her toys because doesn’t play with 
them.
	We should get another pet because we can read to it, get 
exercise, and play whit it. I hope you can be nice and not make 
me DIE. I  hope you can get us another animal.


			Sincerely with love,
					Rachel
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