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Writing Strategies

In January, during our Writer's Workshop we have been working on a revision unit, in which students have been learning how writer's revise using proofreading marks, inserting information by using many methods including a "flap"  and we have talked about how writer's plan what to do to make a story better by fancying it up. Below is a copy of the Checklist we created the first few weeks of school, we plan on continuing to build it as we learn more.  Students may use it at home to revise a piece (which does include rewriting it on a new page).

 

“Writer’s Revise” Checklist

In the Home Journal (If you are revising this week or next.), use this checklist and staple to a piece you revised. Also, rewrite the piece with the revisions. You may use a separate piece of paper or type (with parent help) and staple into the journal. 

 

Story Title: ___________________________________________

 

 

Strategy

What strategy did you use?  Maybe consider a revision using a strategy you did not already use. 

Yes

No

We reread and make plans.

 

 

We reread, make a movie in our mind, and add words.

 

 

We add details to show the reader what happened instead of just telling them what happened.

 

 

We add missing information.

 

 

We add dialogue (talking between characters).

 

 

We take things out that are not related to the main idea or topic of the writing.

 

 

 

What does your story sound like? 

Maybe consider revising to have a storyteller’s voice. 

A Storyteller’s Voice:

A Summarizing Voice:

Tasha meowed at me. “Do you want to be fed?” I asked and she meowed again.  I walked into the kitchen and opened a can of cat food. I emptied it onto her plate and she waited to eat it as I reached into the refrigerator to get the can of whip cream to top it off. 

Tasha meows when she wants to be fed.  She meows louder and louder until I walk into the kitchen to feed her.  She won’t begin to eat the food until I put whip cream on top of it.

 

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In September, we will be launching our Writer's Workshop. We will learn routines and practice doing what writers do. Such as,

  • Writers don't start by drawing, we start by thinking about what you know and care about---Think first, gather the image in your mind, draw, then write (Calkins)
  • When I'm Done---Add details to the picture, Add details to the words, Start a new writing piece.     "WHEN YOU'RE DONE, YOU'VE ONLY JUST BEGUN"
  • Some of us will use the image in our mind and write. For those who still need to take a minute to sketch the image we encourage them to do so because then when we examine the writing we may see details in their picture that they left out in the written words.
  • We will read and bask in a few examples of Tiny Moment stories (narratives) written by members of our class. None of these stories tell just a little about lots of different moments. They tell a lot about just one moment. 
  • Children are reminded that writing is telling about something.  The easiest and best way to write a good story is simply to tell a story from your own life.  All of us hear stories from our parents, brothers, sisters, and our friends. When we write, we are telling stories on paper. 
  • Focusing on rereading one's story to realize if it goes on like a list and then fixing it.
  • When our stories are reread we ask, "Can you see a picture of the story in your mind?" Good stories take the reader into account, the writer tries to answer some of the five "W" questions (Who? What? Where? When? and Why?)

 Four Kinds of Sentences

Students will use proper end marks at the ends of statements, commands, questions and exclamations.  Students practice this skill when completing Daily Language Reviews (Editing sentences #1 & #2) and should be using in their own daily writing. 

A statement is a sentence that tells something.  It begins with a capital and ends with a period.

I have learned several facts about Earth.

A command tells someone to do something.  It begins with a capital and ends with a period.

Ask me something about Earth.

A question is an asking sentence.  It begins with a capital and ends with a question mark.

How many continents are on the planet Earth?

An exclamation shows surprise, excitement, or strong feeling.  It begins with  a capital and ends with an exclamation mark.

What a sight!

 

 

Complete Sentences

 A sentence is a group of words that tells a whole idea. A complete sentence tells about someone or something and what happens.  A sentence must have a noun and a verb.  The noun is called the subject and the verb is called the predicate.  We have talked about identifying subjects in sentences and will continue this skill, as well as identifying the predicate of a sentence.

The cat meowed.

subject--- The cat

predicate--- meowed.

Now we make our sentence better by adding describing words for our noun. 

The small, fluffy, orange cat meowed.

Then we can make our sentence even better by adding an adverb. 

The small, fluffy, orange cat meowed loudly.

Finally, we can make our sentence even better by adding a detail. 

The small, fluffy, orange cat meowed loudly at the little boy with the open can of food.

 

 

Narrowing the Topic

        Students often choose too broad a topic to write about, making their writing general, containing few details.  Second graders will go on and on just to fill the page and really not say many details about the actual topic.  Narrowing the topic can help students to improve their writing.  Parents can work closely with the child by following some of the following steps to guide the child into writing a more focused topic.

"Animals" is a broad topic.  There are many kinds of animals.

A specific animal, such as "dogs" would be narrower and easier to write about.

"Dogs" is still a very broad topic.  We can narrow it to a particular breed of dog, such as "golden retriever."

We can narrow the topic even more.  Writing about "a certain golden retriever that you know” really makes the topic more manageable. 

STUDENTS NEED TO WRITE ABOUT WHAT THEY KNOW. ASK YOUR CHILD TO THINK ABOUT THE SUBJECT, AND THEN SKETCH FROM THE IMAGE IN THEIR MIND A MOMENT/PICTURE (TINY MOMENT) THAT THEY CAN USE TO FOCUS THEIR WRITING TOPIC.   " I like dogs."   is too general. "I taught my dog, Cassie, to do three tricks." is more focused.

 PLEASE DISCUSS THE TOPIC YOUR CHILD DECIDES TO WRITE ABOUT FOR 3-5 MINUTES BEFORE THEY WRITE AND/OR ENCOURAGE HIM/HER TO JOT DOWN EVERYTHING THEY KNOW ABOUT THE TOPIC (PHASES, KEYWORDS, OR PICTURES). THEN IF YOU SEE THE TOPIC IS GENERAL USE THE ABOVE IDEAS TO HELP YOUR CHILD NARROW THE TOPIC. THANK YOU!  :)

Good Spelling

Many of the spelling rules listed are integrated during spelling instruction using Make a Word, McCracken Spelling, in the Daily Language Review (DLR) and while I model writing daily for writing mini-lessons.

We can use spelling patterns from words we know to spell new words.  (float, boat, coat, gloat, goat, throat)

We can add endings to base words to create new words.  (kick, kicks, kicking, kicked, kicker)

In class, students have been shown how to use our Word Writing Steps chart to help them when they come to a word they need help spelling.

                   1.      Say the word two times.

         2.      Hear the first sound, Spell that sound.

  3.      Read it, Say the next part of the word.   

      Write that.

 

 4.      Hear the next sound. Spell that sound.

 

 5.      Repeat steps three and four until you  can’t hear any more sounds.

 

 6.      Reread it.    

 

    

Double the final consonant when the word has one short vowel followed by one consonant. (run, running, swim, swimming, stop, stopped)

Drop the silent e (make, making, skate, skated, joke, joker)

Change the y to i (pretty, prettiest, happy, happier, baby, babies)

Plurals:  add -es when the base word ends in s,z,ch,sh,x (boxes, dresses, lunches, brushes)

Possessive ('s shows ownership)  Dad's tools, Rachel's bike

Homophones: words that sound the same, but are spelled differently and mean different things (their, there, they're, to, too, two, write, right)

Contractions:  (did not = didn't, do not = don't, I have = I've)

a or an:  use "an" before a word that begins with a vowel sound (an umbrella, an apple, an elevator)

                         

Capitalization:  Students will use a capital letter for the first word in each sentence, proper nouns, and the pronoun "I."  Proper nouns are special names for people, places and things.

Noun

proper noun

girl 

teacher

street 

school   

holiday    

store

Taylor

Mrs. Chartoff

Main Street

Bowne-Munro

Thanksgiving

Shop-Rite

                                               

                                    

Writing a Paragraph

  • Paragraphs should have a title.  This is different from the topic sentence.  It is written at the top of your paragraph on it's own line. 
  • Paragraphs begin with a topic sentence.  This is a complete sentence that states what the paragraph will be about. 
  • Indent the first line of your paragraph only.  Continue to fill each writing line and begin each new line at the left margin of the paper (Most journals have a red line to show where the left margin is located.)
  • Sentences should be complete with proper capitalization and punctuation.
  • Describing words, adverbs and strong verbs are used to make the writing interesting.
  • All sentences stay on the topic without repeating information.  At least 3 supporting details should be given.
  • Sentences begin in different ways and different types of sentences are used.
  • Details are clearly stated.  The reader can understand what you are saying.
  • The paragraph ends with a closing (feeling) sentence.
  • Good spelling is used.
  • Neat handwriting is used.

 

 

 

 


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