Smiley Face Writing Tricks ☺
Otherwise known as Methods of Elaboration


1.	The Magic 3:
Three parallel groups of words, usually separated by commas, which 
create poetic rhythm or add support for a point.
For example: My dog was wet, muddy, and smelly after our hike.

2.	Figurative Language:
Non-literal comparisons -- such as similes, metaphors, and 
personification-add "spice" to writing and can help paint a more 
vivid picture for the reader.
For example: He has the heart of a lion (metaphor). My computer is 
quite sick (personification). She was laughing like a hyena 
(similie).

3.	Specific Details for Effect:
Instead of general, vague descriptions, specific sensory details 
help the reader visualize the person, place, thing or idea that you 
are describing. Use sensory details. [What did you see, smell, taste, 
touch, and hear?]

4.	Repetition for Effect:
Writers often repeat specially chosen words or phrases to make a 
point and to stress certain ideas for the reader.
For example: SHE KNEW I was going out on Sunday; SHE KNEW I was 
going to wear my yellow sweater and SHE KNEW how important it was for 
me to look nice.

5.	Expanded Moment:
Instead of SPEEDING past a moment, writers often emphasize it by 
expanding the actions and/or using dialogue.  In other words, 
describe the moment, use plenty of adjectives and sensory details.

6.	Humor:
Professional writers know the value of laughter; even subtle humor 
can help a boring paper into one that can raise someone's spirits, 
and get a better grade!


7.	Hyphenated Modifiers:
Sometimes a new way of saying something can make all of the 
difference; hyphenated adjectives often cause the reader to "sit up 
and take notice."
For example: When I came in late to class, my teacher gave me that 
you've-got-to-be-kidding look. 

8.	Full Circle Ending:
Sometimes students need a special ending, one that 
effectively "wraps 
up" the piece. One trick is to repeat a phrase from the beginning 
of the piece.

Many thanks to Mary Ellen Ledbetter for her "tricks."