Mrs. Obryk's Class

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• franklin

  mrs. obyrk can you help me with opening and a closeing paragraph

  10/2/2009 8:35:20 AM
• santino

  I think writing can be more fun make kids about there most favorite day so far.

  10/2/2009 8:54:50 AM
• Sarah

  I enjoy writing i think its a good way to have fun. Sometimes it can be hard but in the end i think i think every thing turns out good. I also think writing is a good way to just let your imaginnation spring out and just have fun. Some people dont like to writebut most of the time they try and they like it after they try. Thats why i enjoy writing.

  10/2/2009 10:48:32 AM
• jake

  I do not like writting because I get confuse and off topic.I also do not like writting because i can't come up with story details.In addition when I write my hand hurts.

  10/2/2009 11:06:14 AM
• Christopher

  I think writting is enjoyable beacause it teaches you how to make neat, heathy paragraphs.
  I enjoy writing when we write fairytails {There my favorite}.I also enjoy writing beacause you can share thoughts on paper.
  It is not a dreaded activity because it helps you to organize ideas about a topic and explain them.
  Some opinions that make writing easier and more enjoyable are if you stay on topic,have an opening closing, middle , and put compositional risks. What's your blog?

  10/2/2009 11:18:09 AM
• Kiera

  I enjoy writing because i love to write also i think it can be more enjoying by it not having to take long.

  10/2/2009 8:24:52 PM
• Kaltrina

  I love to write. if we did not have writing then we whould not have books,tv shows,and movies

  10/4/2009 5:22:15 PM
• sara

  i love to write when you write you can read your writing and see how good or bad you have done. i am a realy good at writing i realy love to write.

  10/5/2009 3:53:56 PM
• sandra

  i dont like writing because i cant tjink of new ideas to writing prompts

  10/5/2009 4:31:47 PM
• Mrs. Obryk

  I'm happy to see that several of you do enjoy writing! I have always LOVED to write and can't wait to help you make your writing better than it already is. What kinds of things do you enjoy writing...poems, stories, non-fiction?
  
  For those of you who don't enjoy writing, it seems that coming up with ideas for what to write is one of the things holding you back from liking to write. We'll work on this together.
  
  Franklin, yes, we will work on openings and closings this year. Christopher, can you suggest any compositional risks that Franklin might use to improve his openings?
  
  Good job, boys and girls! Keep it up!

  10/6/2009 7:01:56 AM
• Melissa

  I love to write i think its cool and excited. If we didnt have writing we wouldnt know have to write or read. Also it makes our imagination work.

  10/6/2009 3:40:45 PM
• Adesewa

  My feeling about writing a good way to have fun.Sometimes it can be hard but in the end i think everything turns out good.I also think wriring is a good way to let your imaginnation way and just have fun.Some people don't like to write but most of the time they tryand they like it after they try.That's why i enjoy writing.

  10/6/2009 5:54:03 PM
• sandra

  i dont like writing because it hurts my hands and i cant of new ideas like being creative

  10/6/2009 8:22:13 PM
• Parth

  Sorry i didn't do the blogging HW.Thats why i'm blogging now. I like Line Drive. it was a great story

  10/7/2009 3:44:45 PM
• Parth

  I like writing because it is my favorite thing in Language Arts. I get really creative. I always get good ideas. This is why I like writing.

  10/7/2009 3:57:40 PM
• franklin

  i didn't understand the H.W.

  10/7/2009 5:18:18 PM
• Kayla

  I like writing sometimes because it hurts my hands when we write alot.I enjoy it sometimes to.If i could make it easier i would not write that much and it would make me very enjoyable.That is how i feel about my feelings of writing.

  10/8/2009 4:30:44 PM
• Mrs. Obryk

  Parth and Melissa, I'm so excited that you like to write...ME, TOO!!! :)

  10/8/2009 7:52:39 PM
• Parth

  I love doing the code words. It is really fun.Thanks for making the activity.

  10/12/2009 8:05:03 PM
• Mrs. Obryk

  Parth, I'm glad you enjoyed making your Words in Code...remember this is one of the activities you can choose to complete in your literacy centers! :)

  10/13/2009 7:00:38 AM
• Pedro

  I like write story is really fun to make up stuff hopefully we will get some time to great are own

  10/20/2009 2:19:31 PM
• Sarah

  Kool! Mrs.Obryk i like reading plus to and its also my first time doing it to. i like 5TH gread because i made alot more friends then i did last year and you and MR.Nurnberger are better than my old tearchers. I even made some new friends in the 4th greaders. byesee you tomm.

  10/20/2009 3:56:12 PM
• sarah

  Mrs.obryk i enjoyed class today. I think the project was fun for me. I like it cause it was hard trying to make up sentences for the story tree. I like writing cause i get to be creative. Thats why i liked the do now today. Because i got to be creative. I like having you as a teacher because we do a lot of fun stuff in your class. I think my favorite was when we played "GRAMMAR BASKETBALL".

  10/21/2009 4:46:30 PM
• Mrs. Obryk

  We will definitely play basketball again because it's also one of my favorite things to do in class! I'm glad you enjoyed the story trees :)

  10/22/2009 1:16:20 PM
• Parth

  YEAH! WERE PLAYING "BASKETBALL REVIEW"! I love playing basketball.It is so fun!Thanks Mrs.Obryk.

  10/22/2009 7:31:05 PM
• sandra

  mrs.obryk i loved the basketball game it was a fun way to play and learn i wish we keep doing that just like what parth said i like the word code it was fun looking at people trying to think of it
  

  10/23/2009 3:16:00 PM