Mrs. Obryk's Class

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• Kayla

  If i had a power to change places with a fairy tale character,it would be spongebob.It would be spongebob because he is cool.I would change my story by us going to the movies and watch Cloudy with a chance on meatballs.Then we would to Ritas ice to get ice.After that we would go to my house so we could play games.Then we would have a sleep over.But i can not go to his house because he lives in the water and i can not breath under water so he will have to sleep over my house.The next day for breakfast we would go to I Hop.Then we will have to take spongebob back home:(.That is what i would do if i had powers.

  10/21/2009 3:22:39 PM
• Adesewa

  
  I'm pretending that I am given th power to change places with a fairy tale character.It would have to be The Sleeping Princess(Sleeping Beauty).I would be the Queen's baby daughter then my mother forgot to invite on of them,who was a bit of a witch as well.The witch passed my cradle and put a cruse on me.When I was sixteen I went a sleep.Then, my mother went to got to one of my fairy godmother to get a prince for me to be awake.After, on my godmother and my mother found a prince for me.A few days later,the castle that only a short time before had laid in silence ,now rang with the sound of singing, music and happy at the great party in honour of the Prince and Princess,who were getting married. They lived happily ever after,as they always do in fairy tale.The fairies said"Hola to the Prince and I.

  10/21/2009 4:49:23 PM
• sandra

  if i have been given power to change places with a character it would be tinker bell because she is very pretty and has been really nice lately.i might change the spot in the story by being nicer and more caring.i would also use my magic for good uses .if they had a school for fairy people i would use magic to do my homework or any type of school work.

  10/21/2009 4:51:23 PM
• Parth

  Story Trees are a blast! I am looking foward to doing more.I made some last year.It is really easy. The only hard part is to come up with an exact amount of words.

  10/21/2009 5:48:56 PM
• salmira

  i like fairy tales because i like the person shrek andt the thing that i would change about him is his shape and his personallity because he kind of mmean in his movies.

  10/21/2009 6:15:23 PM
• Melissa

  The character I would choose would be cinderella. The things I would change would be the color of my dress. Also be friends with my stepmother and stepsisters.I would also instead of having mice as friends I would have dogs that talk. My dress would be pink with a beautiful gold crown with lots diamonds. My prince would stay the same, but he would know who im am from the beginning. Thats who i would choose.

  10/21/2009 6:29:42 PM
• santino

  I would change places with mickey mouse because i like him more then all the other fairytale characters in every other fairy tale books.

  10/21/2009 8:01:07 PM
• Mrs. Obryk

  I like that many of you are checking out the new blog right away - it's great that you are not waiting until the last minute to complete this assignment. However, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE begin to check your writing for errors before you submit your comment. Keep this in mind: it doesn't matter how fantastic your ideas are if they can't be understood because of proofreading mistakes.
  
  Melissa, great response! Cinderella would be my second choice. Belle from Beauty and the Beast would be my first choice...can anyone figure out why?

  10/22/2009 8:58:19 AM
• Kiera

  If I could be a charecter I would be a princass and I would switch my part by saying that I had my own mall and when u go in the mall u acually enter a HALLOWEEN TOWN!!!!!.Also I would have more maidsand last I would have 1,254,567 HAUNTED HOUSES and 9,087,563 CANDY CARS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  10/22/2009 3:41:35 PM
• mahaganie

  If I was given the power to switch with a fairy it would be Tinker Bell. It would be her because she is very helpful. Then because she thinks of others. The part that I would want to change is being nice all the time. I would want to change that because I don't be nice to people all the time. That is the fairy I would want to change with and the part of the fairies personality.

  10/22/2009 4:56:33 PM
• Kayla

  I think i know why Beauty and the Beast is your first choice because it has a princess in it and it has alot of information in it.

  10/22/2009 7:12:45 PM
• Mrs. Obryk

  Kiera, make sure you follow the directions for writing carefully...WHICH fairy tale character would you trade places with? Check your writing for spelling errors carefully.
  
  Mahaganie, Tinker Bell is my favorite fairy Read the directions carefully, though...FAIRY TALE not FAIRY. I like that you are giving reasons for why you'd like to be Tinker Bell, but instead of just saying that she's helpful (for example) tell me WHY you say that - what did Tink do that was helpful.
  
  Kayla, you're super close with your reason...what exactly did you mean by "it has a lot of information in it"? What kind of information?

  10/22/2009 7:37:35 PM
• franklin

  when we are going to the feild trip were are we going to go

  10/22/2009 8:02:00 PM
• Dhriti

  I would change places with a fairy tale character. I would change places with a witch because witches make magic and I love magic. I like to do trickes and show them to my sister. Also witches can fly on a broom. I love to fly in the sky with the birds. I always imagine things that I could do in the sky. Wiches are also mean, but somtimes nice to. I would like to change that by being nice to other people. That is the fairy I would like to change with.

  10/24/2009 2:49:51 PM
• Ms.Obryk

  The fictional character I would like to be is Wendy from Peter Pan.I would change the story by having Wendy never grow up.She would be able to stay with Peter Pan and the boys and always be able to play and have fun.I think it would be fun to never grow up because then I would never have to worry about all the things grown ups have to do. Another thing is they didn't go to school all they did was have fun. That is why Wendy is the character i would like to be.
  
  

  10/24/2009 7:14:51 PM
• jake

  i would change places with mikey mouse because i like him the best because he is a funny charecter and very helpful to others

  10/25/2009 11:33:17 AM
• Kayla

  Like it has alot of rhymes in it.

  10/25/2009 6:24:15 PM
• Kayla

  HA!HA! I know why Beauty and the Beast is your first choice because in the begining of the movie Bell LOVED to read and dance!!!!!!!!

  10/26/2009 3:26:44 PM
• Mrs. Obryk

  You got it, Kayla! :)
  
  Jake, details, details, details!! You need these in your writing.
  
  Dhriti, nice response :)

  10/27/2009 8:13:10 AM
• Kaltrina

  I would pick tinker bell becauses she is so cute and i <3 her

  10/27/2009 3:55:53 PM
• Mrs. Brady

  If I had the opportunity to change places with a fairy tale character, I think that I would choose to be Little Red Riding Hood. She was an adventurous girl, who liked to do a lot of walking in the woods. She was also very kind, as she brought a basket of goodies to grandma. In my version of the story, Red would carry two baskets...one filled with goodies and the other filled with dog food. She would offer the dog food to the wolf, which would avoid the demise of the grandmother, and she would train the wolf to run around the soccer field so that the geese would not land where the children wanted to play. My version would also have me wearing a blue dress, since that is my favorite color, and the wolf would be named Fluffy instead of Big Bad!

  10/27/2009 4:13:48 PM
• Parth

  I would change places with Goofy because he is funny.His voice makes crack up.Also, he makes people feel good.This is my favorite character.

  10/27/2009 4:45:52 PM
• Sarah

  If i could switch places i would be minnie mouse. Because she is my favorite out of all of them. And she is nice and caring. She is also my favorite because I have to watch it ever moring because of my baby sister. So i see her and mickey mouse and donald duck and dasiy and goophy. Thats who i would switch places with.

  10/27/2009 5:45:10 PM
• Sarah

  HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA YANKEES GOING TO THE WORLD SERIES!!!!!!! NOT THE METS THEY WERE NOT EVEN CLOSE!!!!!!!!!!!!! 40TH TIME LETS GO YANKS

  10/27/2009 5:47:00 PM
• sara mrkulic

  i would be soo amazed and then i would explore every where and i would love it!!!!!!!!!!

  10/27/2009 5:47:03 PM
• chris

  The fairytale character that I would choose to be is Bolt. He is a dog that can do a lot.Instead of thinking I have powers I would actually have them in the story,and Bolt would be able to fly and have good smelling for crimes. This is why I would want to be Bolt

  10/27/2009 7:48:33 PM
• Pedro

  I would change California and NJ so California would be in NJ and NJ would be in California then I would change back

  10/27/2009 7:50:38 PM
• michael

  If I could switch places with a person from a story it would be hercules. And I would say I am the strongest man on the planet.

  10/27/2009 8:18:31 PM
• Nya

  If I had the power to change places with a fairy tale character it would be Cinderella.It was one of my favorie fairy tales when I was younger.Even though people were mean to her she was never mean to them.I would be a more modern Cinderella.I would go to the dance at the White House and dance with Obama but instead of getting married I would win a full scholarship to college.Thanks to the help of my fairy godmother I would easily get my masters degree.Finally I would run for office and become the first female president.

  10/27/2009 9:02:04 PM
• salmira

  If I had the power to be any fairy tale it would be tinkerbell. One reason why I would be tinkerbell is because she is beuatiful. Another reason why I would be tinkerbell is because she lives in a beautiful forest. Lastly,why I would be tinkerbell is because she has many friends that she can rely on and trust. These are some reasons why I would be tinkerbell if I had a chance too.

  10/28/2009 6:07:34 PM
• Parth

  I would switch places with the Three Muskateers.I would jump into battles.I would save people. Also,I would sword figt.

  10/28/2009 7:42:28 PM
• Mrs. Obryk

  Nya, super creative! I love your response :)
  
  Pedro, re-read (our comprehension strategy!!) the directions for this writing prompt.
  
  Mrs. Brady, what an excellent response! I like your solution for keeping Red and her family safe - let's hope that wolf likes Kibbles! :)

  10/29/2009 12:44:04 PM